Don't fret! Your application has potential, but it's not all the way there yet. Before a full judgement can be made, we'd like to see the following changes made to your application as it exists now:

▢ The magic given to Jack-O' is a bit hard to understand as it is written. Please explain the basis of the power and make sure to consider the rule of semantics -- it's hard to discern if there are multiple magic abilities being offered or if it's discussing what all is possible to do based on one power. Something more concise and without the use of an unfamiliar example (BotW) should clear it up!

Please respond with the corrections or response within 48 hours. Also, feel free to ask for clarification on any points.