Don't fret! Your application has potential, but it's not all the way there yet. Before a full judgement can be made, we'd like to see the following changes made to your application as it exists now:

▢ Please elaborate on Ann's magic a little bit more. What all does charming someone entail? How powerful is her charming power, potentially?

Please respond with the corrections or response within response within 48 hours. Also, feel free to ask for clarification on any points.