Don't fret! Your application has potential, but it's not all the way there yet. Before a full judgement can be made, we'd like to see the following changes made to your application as it exists now:

▢ Please expand upon your character's magical ability. How does this hypnosis work, and what does this hypnosis act like? Is it a trance, hallucinogenic, etc? Just some more clarification would be appreciated!

Please respond with the corrections or response within response within 48 hours. Also, feel free to ask for clarification on any points.