Don't fret! Your application has potential, but it's not all the way there yet. Before a full judgement can be made, we'd like to see the following changes made to your application as it exists now:

▢ Right now, your "Magical Ability" section simply states "I can make explosions." Please expand on this power section, or redo it as it's currently in the first person and can't be accurately assessed.

Please respond with the corrections or response within response within 48 hours. Also, feel free to ask for clarification on any points.