Don't fret! Your application has potential, but it's not all the way there yet. Before a full judgement can be made, we'd like to see the following changes made to your application as it exists now:
▢ While there is a personality present, it's one that's very simplistic. This is a malleable silent protagonist, and as discussed on the FAQ, the personality should be fleshed out further than the few details available. For instance, as the personality stands now, these same traits could apply to essentially any Pokemon game protagonist. If there ARE player created traits in the app, please denote which they are.
If it makes it easier, answer questions like: What separates Moon from other Pokemon game protagonists? What flaws does Moon have? How will Moon react to more serious themes that may be found in the game, like death or true danger?
Please respond with the corrections or response within response within 48 hours. Also, feel free to ask for clarification on any points.
REVISION REQUEST
▢ While there is a personality present, it's one that's very simplistic. This is a malleable silent protagonist, and as discussed on the FAQ, the personality should be fleshed out further than the few details available. For instance, as the personality stands now, these same traits could apply to essentially any Pokemon game protagonist. If there ARE player created traits in the app, please denote which they are.
If it makes it easier, answer questions like: What separates Moon from other Pokemon game protagonists? What flaws does Moon have? How will Moon react to more serious themes that may be found in the game, like death or true danger?
Please respond with the corrections or response within response within 48 hours. Also, feel free to ask for clarification on any points.