Don't fret! Your application has potential, but it's not all the way there yet. Before a full judgement can be made, we'd like to see the following changes made to your application as it exists now:
▢ This may just be an issue of canon blindness, but can you clarify a little bit about your perception of Cagliostro's history? While you do make note of your headcanon, there is some confusion about how it relates to her backstory. Does this coincide with her once being a boy who created the girl's body? Also there's a part in the application which mentions shedding her "adult form," which contradicts the Wiki in how old Cagliostro was when creating her form -- or a more apt question may be how old was she when she moved from her old body to her new one? Again, this may just be total confusion on this end, but some clarity would be appreciated!
Please respond with the corrections or response within 48 hours. Also, feel free to ask for clarification on any points.
REVISION REQUEST
▢ This may just be an issue of canon blindness, but can you clarify a little bit about your perception of Cagliostro's history? While you do make note of your headcanon, there is some confusion about how it relates to her backstory. Does this coincide with her once being a boy who created the girl's body? Also there's a part in the application which mentions shedding her "adult form," which contradicts the Wiki in how old Cagliostro was when creating her form -- or a more apt question may be how old was she when she moved from her old body to her new one? Again, this may just be total confusion on this end, but some clarity would be appreciated!
Please respond with the corrections or response within 48 hours. Also, feel free to ask for clarification on any points.