Don't fret! Your application has potential, but it's not all the way there yet. Before a full judgement can be made, we'd like to see the following changes made to your application as it exists now:
▢ For Mako's power, is it more so glitter manipulation, creation or both? For instance, the examples are more about creating glitter, but (for instance) if there was a huge pile of glitter in a world for some reason, would he have the ability to affect it in any way, thus manipulation coming into play?
Please respond with the corrections or response within 48 hours. Also, feel free to ask for clarification on any points.
REVISION REQUEST
▢ For Mako's power, is it more so glitter manipulation, creation or both? For instance, the examples are more about creating glitter, but (for instance) if there was a huge pile of glitter in a world for some reason, would he have the ability to affect it in any way, thus manipulation coming into play?
Please respond with the corrections or response within 48 hours. Also, feel free to ask for clarification on any points.